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02-03-2012, 06:23 PM
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CL ad--how not to sell
This could be one of the more ridiculously written ads I've seen. I guess paragraphs or bullet points for each item is too much to ask....
http://phoenix.craigslist.org/cph/rvs/2830578008.html 
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#2
02-03-2012, 07:59 PM
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Re: CL ad--how not to sell
-----Just got dizzy,,,had to go lay down and take a nap.......Bill S
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02-03-2012, 10:29 PM
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Re: CL ad--how not to sell
I think my web browser is still trying to load all the text. [img]<<GRAEMLIN_URL>>/crazy.gif[/img]
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#5
02-04-2012, 12:18 AM
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Re: CL ad--how not to sell
You guys need to spend some time on Ebay and see an ad like this without the ability to spell.
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02-04-2012, 01:54 AM
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Re: CL ad--how not to sell
Well I do have to say that at least the seller used punctuation and capital letters, which tells me he's probably older than 21.
I wonder where our society will be in 10 years, when the kids today become nurses, pharmacists, and doctors, taking care of our generation. Your text: Can you tell me what the dosage is on these pills? Doctor's text message : take 2 pils 4 yo coff n stuf up nose if u want 2 call me at da offis iz ok Your text : Ok, I will try this medicine. Doctor's text message : yo nerse wil call bak latr ta aks how u feelin bro Welcome to the future....
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02-04-2012, 02:41 AM
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Re: CL ad--how not to sell
You for got to add the following to the Doctor's text:
Doctor's text message : take 2 pils LIKE 4 yo coff n LIKE stuf up nose if u want 2 LIKE call me at da LIKE offis iz LIKE ok And I'm not trying to be funny about this. <div class="ubbcode-block"><div class="ubbcode-header">Originally Posted By: StealthBird</div><div class="ubbcode-body">Well I do have to say that at least the seller used punctuation and capital letters, which tells me he's probably older than 21. I wonder where our society will be in 10 years, when the kids today become nurses, pharmacists, and doctors, taking care of our generation. Your text: Can you tell me what the dosage is on these pills? Doctor's text message : take 2 pils 4 yo coff n stuf up nose if u want 2 call me at da offis iz ok Your text : Ok, I will try this medicine. Doctor's text message : yo nerse wil call bak latr ta aks how u feelin bro Welcome to the future.... </div></div>
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02-04-2012, 07:03 PM
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Re: CL ad--how not to sell
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