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Old 02-25-2007, 09:52 PM
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Default Re: '64 GTO article. Please Review.

There are numerous mistakes in it, but I don't have time to go through it at the moment. The spell check has already been mentioned, and the fact that you've posted it here without going it over with a fine-tooth comb tells me you still have a ways to go.

For one thing, don't call a trim level (like LeMans) an option. And don't say it could be a GTO option because the number has nothing to do with the GTO; instead, make a footnote that shows the GTO package could only be ordered on the Lemans, or something like that.
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